Could you evaluate my english?

Hello to all native speakers out there!

This here is definitely a selfish question, but if you read this maybe you could do me a favor and also go through other posts I did here on NoFap.org and evaluate my english skills? I have no idea how skilled I am and that could help me to be more realistic in evaluating myself.

Here's a link to my journal:

http://www.nofap.org/forum/showthread.php?17282-So-this-is-it-I-finally-ran-out-of-juice

Just fly over the other posts and tell me what you HONESTLY think. I am not afraid of critique

I would really, really appreciate your comments thoughts.