[Finished] My Final Paper is on the Dangers of Porn

Feel free to look at my journal and I would be very willing to help. And bravo to you for tackling this!

 

where did you get the battery thing, i want one!

 

Amazing your work! More people need to hear this ugly truth. I like the use of the adjective "actual" to define sex, how sex should be done. I started using p as a tool for sex education at 18 (i am a girl btw), see what s would have been like and that stop seeing that. I had a priest years ago, during confession, that said that if as long as i didn't watch violent p i was ok. i believe all p is violent even the one that seems "romantic". they make us believe wrongly that is the way real sex is supposed to be

maybe i would focus more on people's stories like the founder of nofap Alexander where you can see the damaged life due to p, go more in details what p changes in people, their sex life, apathy for life, what causes turning to watch p

"The amount of rapists enthralled by pornography is staggering, yet society treats them as the outliers and continues to support pornography" very true this sentence of yours. Below an interview to a man who raped and killed 30 women and how p influenced his behaviour and his fantasies

 

I have been fallowing your thread on your progress and I would love to hear how it goes when you present it to the class!

 

that was a great read and pretty much covered all the major issues. I think you will do well with this. Good luck and let us know how it goes.

 

Very good essay. I commend you for writing on such a sensitive and taboo topic. I hope you won't be slashed for bringing this topic up. It was great to read it and be remembered of all the reasons why I decided to stop watching (even though you didn't really develop on the PIED aspect of it unless I've skipped a part).

 

Not bad. I think, this essay is just perfect. If I were as talented as autor of this, I could have no problems at all. Because, as a student, I'm forced to write essays often. But I don't do it very good. Mostly I just pay for assignment help and other stuff like that. Yeah, I know this is bad. The guys do their job perfect, but I wish I could do it on my own. Just because I want to become a good specialist. Do you have any tips for me? I prefer to ask a real person then search for it in Google.

 

@Optimum Fortitude & @Tams1er, it may be worth noting that the original poster, @Beayur, last visited the site in April 2019 so I doubt he is after further feedback

 

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